Rotten's Book of Poems - *New Poem - 07-10-2008*

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Are These Poems Good Enough To Sell In A Book?

Yes, Everybody should/would buy the Book!!!
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Yes, But I Don't Think Anyone Would Buy...
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12%
No, They're not even good enough to post!
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4%
No, But They're not that bad...
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Total votes: 25

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Rotten's Book of Poems - *New Poem - 07-10-2008*

Postby [FnG] Rotten_Emu » Thu Jan 06, 2005 11:26 pm

Difference:

The Difference is to great,
Why do you hurt me, cruel fate.
For Without the difference in the world,
We would be just one in a great cult.
If we all thought the same,
Wouldn’t that be just lame?

No more secrets, no more fights,
Just brightened days and darkened nights.
No more Change, no turning tides.
Just brightened days and darkened nights.

Is it weird I feel this way?
Do you understand the things I say?
We don’t need to be the same,
But you are not the one I blame.
It is I that was so wrong,
Thinking we might get along.
To big a distance between the two,
But you never let me close to you.
What if I would change into the same,
The same as you, wouldn’t that be lame?

No more secrets, no more fights,
Just brightened days and darkened nights.
No more Change, no turning tides.
Just brightened days and darkened nights.

Why am I not more like you,
I thought I knew you through and through,
I did not see your troubled mind,
I was blinded, you where to kind.
Didn’t drop a hint about this problem,
I was I suppose to know and solve them?
I wish I was more like you, I wish we where the same,
But if we where both the same, wouldn’t that be lame?

No more secrets no more fights,
Just brightened days and darkened nights.
No more change, no turning tides,
Just brightened days and darkened nights.

Please keep some secrets and start some fights,
Not just brightened days and darkened Nights.
Please change a bit and turn the tides,
A Darkened Day, A Brightened Night

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Comment on it if you want... if you don't want to, then don't...
Feedback would be nice, Ideas are welcome, so are suggestions... ow and if you have a request about a poem... I can see what I can do...

I will add the poems I make in my spare time (or in the time I should be doing stuff for school :P:D) read them if you want to, it is noted in the topic title when the latest poem is added so you won't have to look into the topic if you have read it after that date...

Please tell me how to improve my Poems! I am not perfect, I know that, but I would like to come close...
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Postby [FnG] JinX-D » Thu Jan 06, 2005 11:30 pm

You got a talent there, Boy!

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Postby [FnG] Ripp3r » Thu Jan 06, 2005 11:37 pm

N1!!!
Although I don't like poetry I like this one!
Well done!

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Postby [FnG] SirWaka » Thu Jan 06, 2005 11:51 pm

Well done m'boy!
That's the way the cookie crumbles,

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Postby [FnG] Rotten_Emu » Fri Jan 07, 2005 2:24 pm

Dreams

I wish now that it was the other way around,
that dreams and Life would have switched places,
That one day after this, this day would be gone, nowhere to be found,
That a bad day would leave no traces.
That Dream lived on in pictures and in memory,
That sweet dreams would be public for all the world to see.

But Alas my wish is not fulfilled,
Due to the lack of old bottles filled with Genies,
Due to the miracles and Gods that have been killed.

In my dreams, that then would be life,
I would be handsome, two kids and a wife.
A beautiful wife that's for sure,
for every heartache one single cure.
Impossible, or so it seems,
These things I want only exist in dreams.

And thus my wish is not fulfilled,
but not to the lack of Gods and Genies,
But because of the dreams that today where killed.
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Postby Bunnette » Fri Jan 07, 2005 2:29 pm

You have REAL talent there Emu..... :)
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Postby Gifted Child » Fri Jan 07, 2005 3:00 pm

:cry: dude that was beautiful
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Postby [FnG] Rambo » Fri Jan 07, 2005 6:43 pm

well done Rotten.

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Postby [FnG] Rotten_Emu » Sat Jan 08, 2005 8:23 pm

“Them”

If I would change into one of them,
Would someone like me more that way?
Why do I ask myself this then,
Every single day?
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Postby [FnG] SirWaka » Sat Jan 08, 2005 8:45 pm

hey poet, nice job!
you should read neil gaiman's Sandman series :)
they are not poems, but books you'll like, lot of stuff that has to do with dreams and the world of morpheus, god of dreams!

and the thing about gods that are killed,
reminded me of this book,also by neil gaiman: American Gods

definately should read that one,
and just check out Sandman!
that's an illustrated story
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Postby [FnG] Rotten_Emu » Sun Jan 09, 2005 2:51 am

It saddens me that my shortest poem is the one that describes my feelings the best...
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Postby [FnG] eviL<3 » Mon Jan 10, 2005 4:31 pm

[FnG] Rotten_Emu wrote:“Them”

If I would change into one of them,
Would someone like me more that way?
Why do I ask myself this, every single day?


Sad, very sad :(

but very nice poems! :shock:
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Postby [FnG] Rotten_Emu » Wed Jan 12, 2005 7:16 pm

Home or Heart

Home is where the heart is,
That is what they say.
But if you are without a heart,
Wherever would you stay?

Would you still feel homeless,
With a heart but in the rain?
Or would you still feel at home,
Out on the streets where no one came?

Home is where the heart is,
That is what people say.
What if those people got on the street,
With a heart but on a rainy day.
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Postby [FnG] El Tonno » Wed Jan 12, 2005 8:08 pm

Wow man, nice poems... I can't say more or less... they're beautifull!
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Postby [FnG] Rotten_Emu » Thu Jan 13, 2005 8:59 pm

Your Eyes

Damn those Eyes,
Keeping me up where I’d fall down.
Looking through me and see the lies.
Saving my life when I’m about to drown.

Damn those Eyes,
Figuring me out before I do.
Looking through me, my disguise.
Like stars so bright, the brightest blue.

Damn those Eyes,
But I hope they will not fade.
I damn them but they’re so nice.
I should only damn the things I hate.

I Praise those Eyes,
Like God I praise them two.
Pray with my head to the skies.
Please help me with all I’m going through.

I Praise those Eyes,
But they’re not like you.
There is more to you then just those eyes.
I don’t praise your eyes, I praise you.

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just to show that not all my poems are depressive... (this is a poem I've written especially for my Sister btw...)
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